OUGD406
Studio Brief 03
Feedback

After our first presentation we received mixed feedback on our idea, we were told how to make the idea more consistent and make it stronger for the next presentations. The most prominent comments made were that the ideas didn't relate to each other and the video had the strongest theme but it wasn't consistent throughout the printed media. We included the building in the posters and leaflets but abandoned the idea of the wall street which was apparent in the presentation. The video impressed and we were told to further the development of the ideas around the video. In the presentation we didn't mention much about the actual exhibition itself, for example what would happen on the night and the space itself. After feedback we came together to discuss how we could incorporate the videos strong aspects into the printed media of the exhibition.